in the frst ray of sunshine
in the most beautiful of all views
in the melodies of all songs
in the freshness of dews
in the honest smiles
in the innocence of newborns eyes
in the maternal love
in the fathers pride
in the touch of child
in the calmness of night
in the creators sight
in the winners delight
one thing is common..
the feeling is true
just like my dear
my faith in you!!
12 comments:
^:)^ ...awesome!
awwww...thanks...fr the compliment...[:D]...
newaz...so wat do u think of my poem[;)]
more than the ppl have faith in thee
i know u have faith in me
u knw u'll be mine
till the sun loses its shine
Till the moon gets hot
and the sun dies out
u can always trust me
without a tinge of doubt
I wish this faith is there for long
till the birds stop singing their song
I'll work hard with all my might
to prove wat u wrote is right
This is one promise
m gonna keep
till the stars fade away
n stones begin to weep
if only words.. could convey
what my heart wants to say
if only my thots
wud come out of my eyes
u wud know how beautiful
u have made my life
with your unconditional love
with ur smiles for me
with the cares that u shower
i am me with u.. i feel so free
ur touch n ur voice
n ur beautiful eyes
every curve of ur face
ur ever loving gaze
the ease with which u understand
wen i am confused u hold my hand
and with each word tenderness grows
tearing all my fears apart
and the way u wud look straight in my eyes
it touches my tupid heart!!
no words cn tell
what ur heart wants to say
in my life, its ur smile
thats the light's only ray
wid ur sweet gestures
u stand tall
infront of them
all the words look small
to put how u feel
in words is just not fair
infact the words which show ur
true feelings are indeed rare
My love, smiles
touch or care
these r the only things
i got wid me to share
venever u feel confused
or fall down n get bruised
To relieve u of pain
i shall try
just like first drops of rain
on the earth oh-so-dry.
you talking abt ur own heart
and callin it stupid
these r the talks
which i term insipid
if before
u haf never been told
lemme tell you
ur heart is made of gold
with all ur love, affection
care n the smile so sweet
O My beautiful princess
u have swept me off my feet
O My beautiful princess
u have swept me off my feet!!!
~:::: WHOAA nice words dude... ::::~
@ jack
thnx b-)
i gather they r fr me..if not..call me an optimist of the highest order ;-)
man phoebes and sarvee!!!
u guys r totally the sweetest!!
loved the poems..they rock
ji imperfect ji...is zarra nawaazi ke liye shukriyaa!!
well the girl with attitude sure can jot down superb lines. And with your friend you have created a session of poetic conversation that rises and rises as a crescendo of sorts...... truly worhtwhile............ and if the lady Mary Howitt has some time maybe I will be blessed with her latest IM id's..............take care n bbye
Hey I thought you knew me...........
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