Saturday, November 19, 2005

Stars n Me


I am sitting by my window and lookin at the sky...
"Do we really become stars...after when we die..?"

How, I wonder this transition takes place..
where do our hands go.. n where goes our face!!

What makes them sparkle or should I say shine..
Weird it may sound to you, but I think the question's fine.

I really wanna know, how can you tell,
Which ones a guy n which ones a Gal..

Do the old people shine brighter
than the younger ones do...
And also if the country, religion
caste n color matter here too!!

I wonder, as behind the clouds..
moon tries to hide,
Is this what happened to GOD
after when he died

13 comments:

The Doors Of Perception said...

one of the most simplest and loveliest things i have read in a long time.

Anonymous said...

Wwonderful ...

Phoenix said...

i love the last line!!

phoebz said...

@ted thanks

@phoenix...me too:D

Raja said...

Good one :-)

"And also if the country, religion
caste n color matter here too!!"

not 'matters'

phoebz said...

@raja.. the count increases to...:D;))

The Doors Of Perception said...

i was reading the book " the stranger" by albert camus, and i came across this thing, and somehow got reminded of u and ur poem.

"It was as if that great rush of anger had washed me clean, emptied me of hope, and, gazing up at the dark sky spangled with its signs and stars,for the first time, the first, i laid my heart open to the benign indifference of the universe. to feel it so like myself, indeed, so brotherly, made me realize that i'd been happy, and that i was happy still."

phoebz said...

well... wat do i say... u just cant help but think of me all the time[:P][;)][:d]

The Doors Of Perception said...

true true.[:D][;)]

Samyak said...
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Samyak said...

hey Nidhi..
Class poem.. reallz loved this..
simple yet powerful !!
ßß
Hope u too dinät mind me comin here

phoebz said...
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phoebz said...

:)

thanks!!
wud mind if u dont come back:)